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Better Safe than Sorry (EVOLOONS) by CoffeeAddictedDragon Better Safe than Sorry (EVOLOONS) by CoffeeAddictedDragon
Kind of a response/continuation/attempt to show appreciation piece to this rookie141.deviantart.com/art/L… gorgeous random gift dump that :iconrookie141: did that involved Her loon Vitox, Whitey's loon Wren and my loon Perigrim. There are not enough thank yous, omg...

Took me the better part of a last week doing little bits of it, but I'm proud!

Anywho, onto the comic. 


As you might know, Perigrim has a pretty strong gut when it comes to evoloons and other creatures. He's not psychic or anything, he just has a strong feeling about these things, and the vibes he gets from Wren a whole bunch of not good.

She's done things, BAD things, he can tell, but he's never SEEN her do anything nor has anyone found any evidence. Peri also hasn't over looked how loons in the area every so often go... missing... And each time one does, Wren's not far away.

As of right now, it oddly seems that no other evoloon is suspicious of her and many even see her as a sweet and friendly loon (hence why Vitox is so content to chill with her), so for right now Wren remains a sneaky little wolf in sheep's clothing and the best Perigrim can do without outright accusing her is steer others away.

Hope you guys like it. ^^

(P.S. LOOK AT ME JUST USING THIS BLUR TOOL. You all have NO IDEA how long I've been wanting a program that has a BLUR TOOL. ;v; )

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MAGIC COUNT:

LOVE: 

Perigrim: +18 = 141


GIFT:

+24 (going to Perigrim) = 143

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CREDITS:


Perigrim (concerned hoodie child) (c) Me

Wren (has time to kill, apparently) (c) :iconwhiteclaw001:

Vitox (she who's antlers make my hands cramp) (c) :iconrookie141:

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:iconstardustmoonlight1:
StardustMoonlight1 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
spooky 
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whiteclaw001 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You have no idea how much I love this!!
You always seem to know exactly how my characters will act and what they'll say! 
Wren looks so menacing in the second to last panel, it fits her perfectly ;u; You captured pretty much how she lures loons close 
The dialouge is amazing, and fits them all perfectly oml ;v;/ Wren would totally say that as well, because she figures that Peri knows something, but not quite sure how far.
I love the second panel, it's really striking and it really looks good with the color contrast, even though Peri's black/greyish he really stands out!

And ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the blur looks amazing as well, it really pays off for you it adds a lot of depth!!!
The expressions and body language are amazing as ever too!!!

might have to make a reply comic of sorts~~~~
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

Well when someone stalks yo gallery like all the time, you get a good feel for how character react... XDDDD

Man these two really ARE like L and Kira. XD

I'm glad you like the expressions. The second to last one was a toughy but I'm proud of it. ^^

omg if you do that'd be awesome but don't feel like you HAVE too cause I knowyourbusy.... :-D
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:iconwhiteclaw001:
whiteclaw001 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yeah I guess you would get it then XDD

They are, and I love it so much ;u; 

It really paid off for you and it looks sooooo good!!


I'm going to do this even if I'm busy, I have some good ideas for it. Let's say Peri might get a glimpse as to why he's so suspicious of Wren >: D 
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!

Wander Emote: IM SO EXCITED 
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Rookie141 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
maaan this is amazing :''D the moment i saw the first panel and Peri, i knew what was going to happen. you can't imagine how i am sitting here, smile wider than necessary and giggling like an idiot xD
this comic, damn i love it a lot. not only because of the situation itself, but also because of how you manage to display it! the "editing" and paneling and use of blur and dialogue is sooooo goooood i can't even! Wren's pun about having time to kill is really clever and eerie haha. i love everything to bits!
the way you drew Wren's expression really leaves no doubt about anything that's going on in her mind. i love the way you draw gesture and expression generally. ahh this is flawless <'3 poor Vitox doesn't have a clue. guess she can be glad that Peri is around Wren. or is he around Vitox? ;D you think Peri will tell her about Wren?

thanks for drawing this, you definetly made my day : DD
you don't need to thank me btw. i love Peri! i already stated that he's one of my favourite loons, and White's Wren is slowly creeping her way in as well haha

(and yes, watari is right. you should do something about Wren's speech color, at least in the first panel it's very hard to read)

i only now really realize that the three of them are all melanoids. coincidence? I THINK NOT!
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well TOO BAD Im gonna thank you anyways! XD

Maaaan Im so glad you like it! Couldnt resist the chance to play with my new art software and use that comic fuel you made! Like that pic was BEGGING for a continuation!

Peri tries not to hang around Wren, though he will interfere if he sees something fishy and especially if a loon he KNOWS might be targeted. Aaaaand Peri also has a tendancy to "run into" lady loons he finds pretty. XD

Ill see if I can add something to make the rext easier to read. ^^

Melanoids apparently gravitate to eachother. XD cant really blame them, they all are around the same age and have those unique markings.

Also, little side note. If you could just be careful with the swearing on my end i would appreciate it. I am not sensative or anything XD I have family that view my page, thats all. Littler siblings and stuff.  Thank you. ^^;
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:iconrookie141:
Rookie141 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what can i say, art wars with you are always fun :D

oh i see, he just decently orbits around the ladies, waiting for a maiden in need he can save xD

yeah we even have a small pack consisting only of melanoids haha. they just fit together very well, like their own, "different" outcast species heh.

oop i'm sorry ouo" i already recently noticed that i curse way too much when using english and that i should try to tone it down, but in english it just doesn't sound bad, it just seems to be some kind of device to strengthen expression, which is why i especially go overdrive when i'm excited haha.
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Art wars are the only good wars. XD

More or less. XD Waiting for the perfect time to strike with a flower and some silver tongued compliments. XD

Lol I like that, seems fitting that they would just kind of gravitate to one another. 


No need to apologize, totally understandable. XD It certainly made your statements seem passionate and I can definitely appreciate that! XD
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RoeDeerArt Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic looks sooo good!
I kinda like Wren way too much xD
Love her bad and slightly shizophrenic attitude <3

Also I adore Peri, those ears! He looks so beautiful even with the cloak and you can barely see him xD
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha! Thank you very much! ^^ Admittedly I love Wren too, shame she commits atrocities against her own kind... XD And im glad you like Perigrim! ^^
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Coalembers Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
You did a really good job on this, you should be proud! Perigrim should be careful though, he might become the missing one if this keeps up.
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
Yup! Luckily, Perigrim is a clever little cloakloon, so he ahould be able.to hold his own.
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Feraldog1011 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
Daaaaaaaannnnng! That was awesome!
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. ^^
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:iconcirago:
Cirago Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow this is so amazing! what an awesome short story, and really well paneled out! Wren is amazing all the way through! and Peri is so brave! <3
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much glad you enjoyed it. ^^
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DrakeTheAngel Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
*slowly backs away* creepy. I agree with Perigrim.


I love the expressions!
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you kindly. :)
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:icondraketheangel:
DrakeTheAngel Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
You're welcome!
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:iconzellevia:
Zellevia Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
meep! no not Vitox! Stay away! Beware the pretty antler loon for she will eat you!
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She might be a hungerinnnnnggggg!
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:iconzellevia:
Zellevia Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
nooooo not hungering!

i really like Wren's face in the second to last panel!
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh thanks! I'm very proud of it. ^^
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:iconzellevia:
Zellevia Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
it's very much "i have to keep up appearances so i can't outright say i want to kill you but we both know that i want to kill you'
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Almost like L and Kira. XD
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:iconzellevia:
Zellevia Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
i get the reference but at the same time i don't XD
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:iconmythimae:
Mythimae Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohgoodness 

This is really interesting

I lov these characters
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thanks! Credit to the other two artists for making such awesome evoloons too. ^^
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:iconmythimae:
Mythimae Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep!~ :3
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:iconcorvus-draconis:
corvus-draconis Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Beautiful! I had to squint to see the writing though.
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you kindly!

Yup, sorry about that. I would have done normal text but I don't think that would have made a difference. ^^;
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:iconcorvus-draconis:
corvus-draconis Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
it's okay! I think it was the colour that made it confusing, so short of a line around the text effect, yeah there wasn't much you could do. :) still. very pretty!
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If it becomes a reoccurring complaint I might be able to edit the file... But I'll keep that in mind for the future. ^^ Thanks!
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GingerGryphon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Well, I'm glad Peregrim was there, or that'd be the last of Vitox... 
Yeesh, the whole "camping spot" thing actually seems very similar to the backstory we've got for wren so far.
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought it'd be a nice little nod to her origins. ^^ Nice catch.

No guarantee that it would have been the end for Vitox. (but like the title says, better safe than sorry... XD)
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GingerGryphon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Definitely! <_<
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NekoBunny84 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Professional Filmographer
awwwww is cute picture 
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KrestenaWolfShadow Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
Stunning work Star. =D :clap: 
Bad wren, no cookie for you. 
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No cookies (or loons) for you! >:V
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KrestenaWolfShadow Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2017
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